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I got stuck trying to write a character who was too perfect

I was working on a story prompt about a hero, and my main guy had no flaws. It made the whole thing boring. I spent about four hours just staring at the page, trying to figure out why it felt flat. I finally fixed it by giving him a specific fear, like a fear of deep water from a childhood thing. Has anyone else had a character problem that took forever to solve?
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sethc12
sethc127d ago
Four hours staring at a page sounds about right.
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michaelnguyen
Ever tried staring at a blank wall instead?
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